Some parents and teachers agree that the behaviour of children should be strictly controlled. others, however, believe that children should be allowed to do experiment freely . discuss both views and give an opinion
It is often argued that mother, father
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teacher at school should not in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
control
a child's behaviour or they should be left free.Use synonyms
in
my view, parents play an important role in the development of the character of their son or daughter and Suggestion
In
hence
they should strictly monitor the way they behave. In Linking Words
this
essay, I will dissent and expound my viewpoints Linking Words
furthermore
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this
regard.
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Firstly
, in the modern world children Linking Words
are surrounded
by technologies and the fantasies they create.Suggestion
is surrounded
movies
and video clips often portray violence in them and these are considered heroic. Suggestion
Movies
children
, Suggestion
Children
as a result
, indulge in these activities thinking that it is a positive trend, if not interested by parents or teachers. Apart from technologies, peer pressure can Linking Words
also
result in the development of ill behaviour, especially in teenagers. Linking Words
if
parents fail to Suggestion
If
control
or warn them about a bad group he or she is part of, it may have a deleterious effect, not only on the personalty personal Use synonyms
also
on the family as a whole. Linking Words
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However these
children, teenagers Accept comma addition
However, these
in particular
atop obeying parents after they become part of Linking Words
these group
.
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this group
these groups
Secondly
, a kid learns his Linking Words
first
lessons from family.Linking Words
parents
can teach them good manners at an early age and it can be made a part of their character by rewarding them if they obey and punish them if they do not. Suggestion
Parents
Moreover
, teachers are well-trained professionals and they should spend their time building good characters in pupils because they are our future generation. Linking Words
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, an ill-behaved kid will cause trouble for all other students and teacher have every right to punish him.
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On the contrary
, some people believe that children should be provided with freedom and privacy and parents and teachers should not Linking Words
control
or interfere with them. Use synonyms
they
Suggestion
They
suggests
that kids should learn through observation, and experimentation of their surroundings through committing errorsSuggestion
suggest
.
Accept space
.
lessons
learnt in Suggestion
Lessons
this
manner is very unlikely to be forgotten and it helps in shaping the character of the individual by making them more confident and independent.Linking Words
on
the other side, Suggestion
On
this
method is Linking Words
experimentative
and there is no evidence to prove that these children turn out to be successful in life later on.
In Suggestion
recApitulation
, I am opinionated that parents and teachers should emergence during embryonic development of various characters or structures that appeared during the evolutionary history of the strain or species
recapitulation
control
their children's behaviour in early childhood because these will aid to build their personality and leads to be a more considerate and compassionate human being.Use synonyms
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