Some parents and teachers agree that the behaviour of children should be strictly controlled. others, however, believe that children should be allowed to do experiment freely . discuss both views and give an opinion

It is often argued that mother, father

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teacher at school should not

control

a child's behaviour or they should be left free.

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In

my view, parents play an important role in the development of the character of their son or daughter and

hence

they should strictly monitor the way they behave. In

this

essay, I will dissent and expound my viewpoints

furthermore

in

this

regard.

Firstly

, in the modern world children

are surrounded

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is surrounded

by technologies and the fantasies they create.

movies

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Movies

and video clips often portray violence in them and these are considered heroic.

children

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Children

,

as a result

, indulge in these activities thinking that it is a positive trend, if not interested by parents or teachers. Apart from technologies, peer pressure can

also

result in the development of ill behaviour, especially in teenagers.

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If

parents fail to

control

or warn them about a bad group he or she is part of, it may have a deleterious effect, not only on the personalty personal

also

on the family as a whole.

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However, these

children, teenagers

in particular

atop obeying parents after they become part of

these group

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this group

these groups

.

Secondly

, a kid learns his

first

lessons from family.

parents

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Parents

can teach them good manners at an early age and it can be made a part of their character by rewarding them if they obey and punish them if they do not.

Moreover

, teachers are well-trained professionals and they should spend their time building good characters in pupils because they are our future generation.

In addition

to

this

, an ill-behaved kid will cause trouble for all other students and teacher have every right to punish him.

On the contrary

, some people believe that children should be provided with freedom and privacy and parents and teachers should not

control

or interfere with them.

they

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They

suggests

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suggest

that kids should learn through observation, and experimentation of their surroundings through committing errors

.

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.

lessons

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Lessons

learnt in

this

manner is very unlikely to be forgotten and it helps in shaping the character of the individual by making them more confident and independent.

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On

the other side,

this

method is

experimentative

and there is no evidence to prove that these children turn out to be successful in life later on. In

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emergence during embryonic development of various characters or structures that appeared during the evolutionary history of the strain or species

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, I am opinionated that parents and teachers should

control

their children's behaviour in early childhood because these will aid to build their personality and leads to be a more considerate and compassionate human being.