Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years,
selecting
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the selecting organization
selecting organizations
organization
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for jobs has become a critical decision. Some believe that working in
same
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the same company
company
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throughout is better, others believe in working
in
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with
multiple companies is more beneficial. In
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essay, I will discuss both the sides of the topic and propose my opinion. To start with, being in same
organization
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gives an opportunity to have a good
repo
informal abbreviation of 'representative'
rep
rapport
and knowledge of end- to end process.
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is due to the fact that the employee has
prospect
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the prospect
of becoming a subject matter expert and help in training of new joiners.
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,
person
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a person
the person
also
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becomes beneficial for long term plans of
company
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such
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as, retirement plans, gratuity, health insurance etc.
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, being in
single
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a single company
company
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throughout can give more stability in one’s life.
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, changing
organization
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will lead to monetary benefits.
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is because when a person joins a new
company
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gets a hike of 25% on an average in salary.
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, employee tends to get better of information and technology with the new
organization
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.
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, to add on people might have better future prospect with adding new job profile to their resume.
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, being in multiple organizations is becoming more common among youngsters. To conclude, having considered both the views, single job will lead to being
expert
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an expert
and long term benefits,
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job switch leading to
monetary
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money
and personal growth has become more important nowadays. So, as both the kind of jobs has pros and cons, I agree with the latter opinion.

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