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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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The thought of following only one career has become outdated these days. The modern scenario is to pursue several occupations and learning shall never be stopped during the life. I strongly believe that multiple career would be
beneficial
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beneficial, however
however
,
this
 essay will discuss the negative aspects of the same.
To begin
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 primarily, working in various fields can raise their income and
consequently
 it will uplift standard of living. To illustrate, dual income will enhance
lifestyle
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the lifestyle
 of people as they will be able to afford luxury and valuable assets.
For instance
, engineers working in a MNC can
also
 work as a personal tutor which will help them to secure their financial status
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Secondly
, working
in diverse environment
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in a diverse environment
 helps to grow more rapidly as experiences gained from several fields open the doors of new opportunities globally. People grow in a better way
by
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of
 attaining the knowledge from all areas of work
.
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 To explain
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people can implement the learned techniques from one field to another. The negative aspects of multiple careers
can not
can not
cannot
 be ignored. There is no
deny
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denying
 to the fact that there will be no time for family if a person is employed in more than one place.
Life
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The life
 of a person has become more stressful as the work pressure affects the health status of a person
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 To conclude, several careers lead to increase in income which benefits the people living their life to the fullest.Success can be achieved in an appropriate manner by continuation in education which may set favourable circumstances to grow and have a good fortune.But, the negative impacts of multiple career can be stressful for the individuals which cannot be ignored.
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