In modern society, some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some people advocate that students don't need to go to the real classroom,
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they can attend it online, directly from their homes. In my opinion, I utterly believe that physical presence
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in
educational institutions is the only way to make the best of students.
Firstly
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, I would take myself as an example,
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
during my university I
passsed
go across or through
passed
possessed
posed
some of the online courses.
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, I can say that the quality of a knowledge gained is not the same and I had many questions while I had watched videos, but I
couldnt
could not
couldn't
make any questions. It's only a one way type of communication.
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, our
foucs
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
is much better when we are in the same room as a professor, and we can better experience the topic
that is
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being presented.
Secondly
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, the school plays a very
imporant
of great significance or value
important
role in our lives and the most significant thing provided is
process
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a process
of socialization. We spend a
third
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of our childhood time in and around the
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classrooms, learn
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not only from professors but
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from our friends and we shape our personalities.
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the place where we meet our
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friends, we make a wide number of contacts and some people can even find their future partner there;
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, the school cannot be replaced to any virtual platform. To sum up, I think the moment we start to transform our society into virtual one will be the end of civilization as we know today.
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, the
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beings will not use their full social and intellectual potential and that we will stagnate. I'm afraid even to imagine what would happen if we take out schools and move
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a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
classroom
to online
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a raised horizontal surface
platforms
.

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