It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important . Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that

government

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dedicated constant attention to various programs which is aimed at the preservation and development of Flora and fauna which leads to huge capital

been

the state or fact of existing

being

spent. I completely disagree with

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view and I think that more finances has been extended on other basic social amenities.

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of all the major priority of the

government

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of any given society is how to provide basic needs

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as food clothing and shelter. Most

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government

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governments

has fulfilled

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have fulfilled

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responsibility and as

also

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increased the standard of living in their countries.

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, by providing farm equipment and machinery to aid mechanized farming and

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building low cost housing estate for the benefit of the less privileged.

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, more money has been spent on health care at different levels and different projects

has been initiated

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have been initiated

in the health sector aimed at ensuring the general well-being of the citizens.

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providing immunization schemes for children from birth to the age of five, creating

special facility

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special facilities

a special facility

for pregnant women

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old people and employing qualified personnel.

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, the

government

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allocates

large amount

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a large amount

large amounts

of money to security and defence sector in order to safeguard lives and property of their citizens and to

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defend the territorial integrity of their country a recent study shows that most countries in the world has increased the amount spent on security in the

last

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few years.

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, there has been

significant rise

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a significant rise

significant rises

in technology advancement and improvement of the economy. Most countries have put more effort to make themselves relevant among member States by launching satellites, inventing nuclear weapons and lots more.

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of the ever increasing population of many

countrie

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

, the governments involved as created means of reducing unemployment rate amongst the

youth thereby

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youth, thereby

minimizing social vices

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as stealing,

gangsterism

a criminal who is a member of gang

gangsters

, drug dealing

etc

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common among people of

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age. In conclusion,

government

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have allocated

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has allocated

more money to solve other problems.