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Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species,while others believe that it is waste of money. What is your opinion?

#people #money #species #waste
it
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It
 is
human's responsibility
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the human's responsibility
 to protect flora and fauna. Some
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 believe that crowd
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
shall
 spend extensively for
protect
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protecting
 those animals which are in danger
,
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,
while others think that it is wasteful thing.
This
 essay will discuss as to why more
money
 should be spent on it. On the one hand
,
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,
 those who believed that it is squander of
money
 for
numerious
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
 reasons.
First
 of all,
government
 should spend huge amount of
money
 on industrial sectors who will give job
opportunity to
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opportunity, to
 youngsters
,
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,
rather than on endangered animals.
because
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Because
 it is necessary for
government
 bodies to focus on industrial development rather than spending
money
 on those species which are in threat.
it
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It
 could be consumed plenty of capital.
For instance
,
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,
 China
recentaly
in the recent past
recently
 spent one
third
 of its GDP on protecting them due to that
,
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,
at present there is the time of recession.
On the other hand
,
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,
it is crucial to
nation
 for several reasons.
Firstly
,
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,
as they are
salient factor
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salient factors
a salient factor
 in
country's development
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the country's development
,
government
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the government
 has to spend
money
 to protect them.
because
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Because
 it is
best way
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the best way
 to bring back
touristers
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
 from worldwide to watch them
at
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in
 cages where they are kept. If more visitors come, they will enhance the income sources for
government
.
Furthermore
,
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,
due to that
youngsters
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youngster
 will get essential information on how much these animals are important for
nation
 as these are
pride
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the pride
 of
nation
. To conclude, despite the waste of
money
of
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on
by
 protecting animals which are
at
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on
edge
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the edge
 of extinction
.
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.
 I
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
believes
 that it is prominent for
nation
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a nation
 to
progess
gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
 economically, industrially and globally.

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