In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?
Many cities across the globe are witnessing a decline in the quality of
life
. Use synonyms
This
essay will look at the reasons behind Linking Words
this
and give some possible measures to overcome the problems of city dwellers.
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Firstly
, an Linking Words
ever increasing
population and migration of Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
people
from rural to urban areas have caused congestion. Use synonyms
This
has led to growth in the Linking Words
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
slums
in some areas. Use synonyms
Slums
as we know do not have any basic Use synonyms
facilities
like hospitals, sanitation, Use synonyms
clean
drinking water and are a hotbed of diseases. Correct word choice
and clean
As a result
of living in unhygienic conditions, not only Linking Words
Use synonyms
people
in Add a missing verb
do people
slums
suffer from serious health problems, but Use synonyms
also
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aid
the cause of Verb problem
apply
spreading
Correct article usage
the spreading
flu
and other viruses. Change preposition
of flu
Secondly
, hectic Linking Words
schedule
and excessive Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
workload
Fix the agreement mistake
workloads
also
hamper the quality of Linking Words
life
. To explain it Use synonyms
further
, extended working hours, Linking Words
long
commuting Correct word choice
and long
time
leave urban with hardly ever time to Fix the agreement mistake
times
involve
in recreational activities, which are indispensable to ensure the Wrong verb form
be involved
well being
of human beings. Add a hyphen
well-being
As a consequence
, there has been a sharp rise in the prevalence of psychiatric problems among Linking Words
people
in large cities.
To look at the possible measures, the government should develop affordable accommodation Use synonyms
facilities
to accommodate an ever-growing number of city dwellers. There should be strict restrictions on Use synonyms
building
of Add an article
the building
slums
and Use synonyms
a
stern action Correct article usage
apply
need
to Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
take
against offenders. In order to control the influx of rural migrants, the government should focus on the development of the countryside. Gyms and recreational Wrong verb form
be taken
facilities
like parks, gardens Use synonyms
and
yoga centres, etc should Correct word choice
apply
also
be constructed by the government and there should be no charge to use them. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
positives
of good health should be highlighted, asking Correct article usage
the positives
people
to follow a balanced Use synonyms
life
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, Linking Words
unfettered
growth of Correct article usage
the unfettered
population
, stressful lifestyle and lack of basic Correct article usage
the population
facilities
in certain areas have made Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
life
worse in cities. Undoubtedly, if Use synonyms
this
situation is to be improved, effective measures have to be taken.Linking Words
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