Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is very often debated whether the

government

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should extend a helping hand to the artists or not. Some individuals are of the opinion that

government

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bodies should provide support to artists, while others consider it to be a waste of money.

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analyse both sides before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, providing financial

assitance

the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

assistance

to artists can benefit the

country

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as art is a form of expression and it's commonly used to showcase traditional beliefs and cultural values of a particular

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that, enhances global exposure leading to an increase in tourism. The rise in

toursim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

, increases the inflow of foreign

currency which

Accept comma addition

currency, which

eventually improves the economy of the

country

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.

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, the Taj Mahal in India, Agra is one of the seven wonders of the world and

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, it was built in 1,648 but, even today it's a monument

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high

higher

desired

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Desired

to be visited by many. It's the

first

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piece of art which is spoken about when a person thinks about India.

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example clearly illustrates, how art can improve a

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's recognition and

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, providing financial aid to artists can bring strong benefits to the

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.

On the other hand

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, there are some people who consider investing money on artists to be wasteful. People in

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group are of the opinion that, the finances can be used

efficiently

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Efficiently

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

in

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world countries, by providing basic necessities

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as safe drinking water, proper food to eliminate malnutrition, education to increase literacy levels that leads to reduced crime rates and good infrastructure to improve the safety of citizens. Take

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, a recent research showed that Africa is among the top countries that suffers malnutrition, even today.

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, based on

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example, the

government

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needs to prioritize

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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funds efficiently to

iraditcate

kill in large numbers

eradicate

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issue as it's the hour of the need. On analysing both the sides, I am of the opinion that

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government

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the government

should definitely support artists, as in the long run, the

country

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will reap benefits from the subsidies

provided

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Provided

to them.