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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the scanner I bought from your shop 2
month
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months
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 ago. I am the personal assistant to the manager of AYZ company and I am working from home due to personal reasons. Unfortunately, the machine started to scan some of the papers, contrary three days ago, I managed to do my job despite the errors, But today it stopped working completely.
Also
,
it’s even does
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 not connect to any electronic device.
This
 scanner is helping me to do all my duties from home and I am making efforts to keep my job.
Moreover
,
next
 Monday I have to send two major monthly reports of main projects which depends on scanning tons of documents and uploading them
in
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 the management server another point is that the boarding managers want to observe on the whole. Above all, so I would deeply appreciate
if
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it if
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 you could fix my scanning equipment by Friday or replace it with a new
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an
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 appropriate one if it is not fixable. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Ghazale
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Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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