The problem with society today is that it is essentially unbalanced, with some people being paid huge salaries to work very long hours, whilst others do not have a job and have too much time on their hands. There is no middle ground. Do you agree or disagree?

Many commentators are of the view that nowadays the challenge faced by the community is that there is no balance between the hefty wages being offered to certain individuals to

work

for extended hours, whereas unemployed people have ample of time to fritter. I partially agree with

this

statement, and would expatiate my opinion in the below paragraphs. Ostensibly, the stretched working hours of employees yield them enhanced visibility in the eyes of management, and

thus

, effectuating aggrandized income. It is rightly said that the harder you

work

, the luckier you get. To exemplify, several surveys carried out in various parts of the world have accentuated that mortals who

work

for

extra duration

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the extra duration

tend to draw massive salaries as the organisation gets enchanted by their dedication towards

work

.

Moreover

, as the designation becomes valuable, responsibilities augment, and worth of an employee is

surged

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surging

.

However

, taking into account the swelling up-to-the-minute competition, there

exist majority of

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exist in the majority of

exist the majority of

individuals who struggle to earn a decent living either for being never employed at all, or being made redundant by the firms.

Therefore

,

being left

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been left

with no alternative, these mortals have abundant time to squander.

Devil

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The devil

is the workshop of idle hands to do, and

thus

, these

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

often get indulged into corrupt practices in an urge to make money

alacritously

.

Nevertheless

,

Accept space

,

apart from these two extreme categories of humans, there are a specific proportion of mortals who are blessed enough to strike an accurate balance through efficient yet highly skilled nature of their employment. To illustrate, professionals working in automation sectors have been known to draw

handsome salary

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a handsome salary

for their

meager

deficient in amount or quality or extent

meagre

major

mature

but significant and utilitarian working hours. With the advent of state-of-the-art technology, automation is the future, and people working in

this

sector are earning tremendously. All in all, after carefully comparing and contrasting all the above rationale, it can be deduced that the imbalance between the massively salaried

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

working for expansive hours and unpaid individuals having excessive spare time is evidently aggravating.

Nonetheless

, the picayune middle ground does exist on account of certain mortals relishing

work

life balance.