Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Nowadays intelligent people are respected around the world.
Although
a few public
considered
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Considered
that
success
is the best measure, others deny and believe that there are a few other
ways
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Ways
to measured talents. In my opinion, I personally think that
success
is the significance
policy
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Policy
for intelligence because
success
give the
confidence
as well as push the people in a new
happier
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Happier
life
as well.
Firstly
, people got the
confidence
from being successful.
In other words
,
success
always
appropriate
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Appropriate
the human for doing well every time and people always try their best in every work
of
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Of
life
.
For example
, while my brother got GPA FIVE in Secondary Certificate Examination, he
again
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Again
started to
putting
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put
his hundred percent effort,
as a result
, he
earn
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earns
GPA FIVE again in the Higher Secondary Examination.
Besides
,
success
always give
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always gives
the
confidence
to people
for
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in
doing
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Doing
well all time.
Secondly
,
success
made happier
life
of people.
In other words
, society
always respect
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always respects
the
successful
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Successful
people in the society as well as in the field of work,
for instance
, successful people
got
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Got
the best job opportunities in all over the world because of only the
success
of people. As a
result
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Result
, they can build their future happier.
Moreover
, a happier future is important for the family
of
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Of
successful people as well. In conclusion, succeeding in
life
is beneficial in various ways.
However I
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However, I
think that being
successful
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Successful
is the best way for intelligence. Because it
always bring
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always brings
has always brought
the
confidence
as well as
manufactured
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Manufactured
happier upcoming days
also
.

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