Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

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are respected around the world.
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a few public
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that
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is the best measure, others deny and believe that there are a few other ways to
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talents
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. In my opinion, I personally think that
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is the significance policy for intelligence because
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give
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confidence
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push
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people
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a new happier
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as well
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,
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got
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confidence
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from being successful.
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,
success
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always appropriate the human for doing well every time and
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always try their best in every work of
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,
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my brother got
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FIVE in
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Certificate Examination, he again started to
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his hundred percent effort,
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, he
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FIVE again in the Higher Secondary Examination.
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,
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always
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confidence
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to
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for doing well all
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.
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,
success
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made happier
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of
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happier.
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, society always
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the
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apply
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successful
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in
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society
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in the field of work,
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, successful
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the best job opportunities
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all over the world because of
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success
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of
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. As a result, they can build their future happier.
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, a happier future is important for the family of successful
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as well. In conclusion, succeeding in
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is beneficial in various ways.
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I think that being successful is the best way for intelligence. Because it always
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confidence
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manufactured
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happier upcoming days
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also
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.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Topic Vocabulary:
  • measure
  • intelligence
  • success
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • emotional intelligence
  • creativity
  • practical skills
  • standardized testing
  • academic performance
  • capabilities
  • potential
  • privilege
  • correlate
  • hard work
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