As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree.?

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In today's world, businesses is not only for making money, but
also
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have social responsibilities. Though, making money is the
first
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and foremost of each business, one who wants to have respect should have come to make some social
responsibity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
such
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as charity, auction for a goodwill, protect living environment or
just do
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just does
3R (reduce, reuse, recycle), etc... A businessman needs to know how
to make
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making
money and even keep his company prolongs. Three main sources for an organisation is
finance
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financed
, materials and human. Materials in
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
way are limited.
Therefore
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, those who used them much should invest more, like planting a forest.
Likewise
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, human capital is not easy to acquire so businesses which have high care of society often get good marks. In fact, like Karma, those who invested in one thing will get another thing returned. It is specially right that,
for example
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, if you give away as some percent in your total revenue to an NGO organization, your customers and staff will pay more to buy your products just to want to join with you in that kind of charity. 'Do 3R' is a famous words in 1990s. Nowadays, we know it as '
environment
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environmental
protection' - bigger and totally fuller.
Last
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century, we focused on small things around us, tried to invest in new technologies which had helped to reduce harmful airs. But, the concentration in
this
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decade spreads from protecting water resources,
cleaning electricity
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cleaning, electricity
to the warmth of the globe's climate and even the old thing - glasshouse polluted air. Upon to social needs in each country, donations have its types: old people care and employment help in developed countries, education and
medical
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medicines
medicine
medication
medications
in developing countries, you name it. But,
this
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world always has its rule: what goes around comes around. So, a business earned the profit of its resources should pay more for it as a return.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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