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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #job
As is known, these days , a
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,
ajority of workers
work
 for only earning money.
Therefore
, some suggest that staying at unen
joyable
work
 is not bett
er for
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good
 people not doing any jobs. I somewhat agree with the above-mentioned idea as the arguments for and against it are equal.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the provided argument. The major reason why I think that conducting
work
 which is interesting for work
er is
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the worker
a worker
noticeably vital is that because when people perform the jobs which are loved by them, they might obtain much more
achievement. On
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more achievable
e clear example to
this
 is Jonathan Kona who likes architecture he studied in medicine and he will be doctor due to he always was stressed,but
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,
he changed his education into
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in
hitecture ,
as
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,
result of which now he is famous arch
itectur in
an architectural product or work
architecture
architectures
the world. Another convincing argument is that when people do
work
 which is not enjoyable for them, they cannot be spec
ialist in
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specialized
this
 job, only they might earn money .
As
a
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.
 result, after retiring these people are not considered as expe
rt in
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an expert
experts
their majors. From another angle, I am
also
 convinced that doing uninteresting
work
 can
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can have
alicious effe
cts for
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effect
 work
er's hea
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workers'
lth.
This
 is because while they
work
 in
this
jobs ,th
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this job
ey
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,
do not pay attention their movements.
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,the
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can cause some accident ,
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result of which they can get inju
ry.
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injured
 In summary, considering the above-mentioned reasons, I somehow agree that to be unemployed is better than being performed with a job which is not enjoyable for workers.I recommend that people should choose a job which is more interesting for them than others.

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