Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, more and more countries set the most important goal for their countries are the development of

economic

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economies

economics

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, others believe there are different sectors

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play the same important role

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in

a

country

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. In my opinion,

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the rise of economic is exceedingly important, other elements are

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weighty. It is clear that economic growth acts a vital role in making a nation become better. The

economy

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goes up which means per capita income increases, leading to a higher living standard. The superpowers all have the powerful economies that can make a lot of money which support

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for

in

the

country

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as a whole.

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, Taiwan had a significantly

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lower

average income before 1980;

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, the

economy

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had been rising 10% annually

in average in more

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on average more

on average in more

than 20 years. Eventually, the nation

creatives

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better infrastructure, public transportation, health care for their citizens.

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the development of one’s

nation

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nation's

economy

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, some other aspects

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need to be treated as important as economic rising. Poverty should

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be one of the most concerning problems for central government. If an institution of a

country

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can only benefits

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can only benefit

the specific

classes

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classes, then

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it is not an effective and fair government. The distance of the wealth and the poor in a society should

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be

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concerned because they both the rich and the poor represent a

country

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. Human economic activities usually harm the environment which would not be preserved for our

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generations if we do not have

specific act

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a specific act

to protect.

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, China’s

economy

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have been increasing

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has been increasing

has increased

dramatically in the

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decades but

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decades, but

the air polluted in their big cities are under pressure and it leads to many diseases to human To sum up, it is truly right that economic growth is extremely important for a

country

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.

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, other problems

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as poverty, the gap between the rich and the poor, as well as environment protection should equivalently be taken care.