Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/ her own healthy lifestyle others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give opinion
It is believed by some people that citizens are primarily instrumental for their healthy habits;
however
, others opined that it is the duty of statutory bodies. Linking Words
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lifestyle
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On the other hand
, individuals have the ultimate right to choose their diet and to do physical exercise and I agree. Linking Words
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a drastic impact
health
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lifestyle
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,
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As a result
, it reduces the deleterious impact of obesity and makes them fit and strong.
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the other hand, it is often believed that government should educate and give free- treatment to individuals. Despite of the Suggestion
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governing authorities
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education regarding healthy living habits, it will increase the Use synonyms
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more, providing either free-treatment or subsidies would promote yearly medical checkup and early treatment. Suggestion
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.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that Suggestion
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health
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the health
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