Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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modern
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builded
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built
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with
the help of
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.
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,
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help
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helps
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to develop
develop
the communication method
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, contacting each other.
Technology
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has affected the
distance
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relation
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making and creating fake
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as well,
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, in my opinion, I think that it has become
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a negative development
development
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because of
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likewise
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problems. On one hand, people these days building
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relation
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relations
and fake
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with
the help of
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which are affected.
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,
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relation
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produced vital negativity in society.
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, if there is any problem or misunderstanding in
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, boys or girls started to post
innaperate
not exact
inaccurate
contents which is disappointing news for the family of someone.
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, fake
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is
building
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built
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with
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.
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, people are cheating each other,
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, hearts are
brooking
physically and forcibly separated into pieces or cracked or split
broken
around the
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and people cannot trust each other.
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, my cousin Faruk recently cheated
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with
a girl
in
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on
Facebook who was fake totally and my cousin now feeling depressed at full day and night.
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,
technology
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affecting the making
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types seriously.
On the other hand
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,
technology
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affecting the types of relationships people making and it has
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a negative development
development
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around the
world
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because of the reason of
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problems.
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negative
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development increasing
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development, increasing
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rate because people attend to do
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when he cheated.
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, a girl recently attempted
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and dead after cheated by a boy she loves.
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,
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negative
development
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disturbing the happier societies around the
world
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. In conclusion,
technology
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helping to connect each other easily.
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, it is affecting the relationship types by producing
distance
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relation
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and fake as well. I personally believe that These
relations developing
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relations, developing
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likewise
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negative lessons in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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