Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays,

this

modern

world

builded

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built

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with

the help of

technology

However

technology

help

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helps

to developed

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to develop

develop

the communication method

such

, contacting each other.

Technology

has affected the

distance

relation

making and creating fake

relation

as well,

although

, in my opinion, I think that it has become

negative

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a negative development

development

because of

suicide

likewise

problems. On one hand, people these days building

distance

relation

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relations

and fake

also

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with

the help of

technology

which are affected.

Firstly

distance

relation

produced vital negativity in society.

In other words

, if there is any problem or misunderstanding in

relation

, boys or girls started to post

innaperate

not exact

inaccurate

contents which is disappointing news for the family of someone.

Secondly

, fake

relation

building

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built

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with

the help of

technology

Therefore

, people are cheating each other,

as a result

, hearts are

brooking

physically and forcibly separated into pieces or cracked or split

broken

around the

world

and people cannot trust each other.

For instance

, my cousin Faruk recently cheated

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with

a girl

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Facebook who was fake totally and my cousin now feeling depressed at full day and night.

Besides

technology

affecting the making

relation

types seriously.

On the other hand

technology

affecting the types of relationships people making and it has

negative

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a negative development

development

around the

world

because of the reason of

Suicide

problems.

This

negative

development increasing

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development, increasing

suicide

rate because people attend to do

suicide

when he cheated.

For example

, a girl recently attempted

suicide

and dead after cheated by a boy she loves.

Furthermore

this

negative

development

disturbing the happier societies around the

world

. In conclusion,

technology

helping to connect each other easily.

However

, it is affecting the relationship types by producing

distance

relation

and fake as well. I personally believe that These

relations developing

Accept comma addition

relations, developing

suicide

likewise

negative lessons in society.

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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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