Some people belive that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of the high school programmes

Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part in future school programmes and I agree to a high extent with
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discuss about positive side and after I put negative side in my 3rd argument. Taking
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account, some people think that children should participate in some community events. Becoming a part of
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this event
these events
they can get experience and knowledge related
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these activities
this activity
at certain they can improve their capabilities and maintain their stamina as well. Doing
this
type of other activities children should
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, from doing
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these types
this type
of activities rich people
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know
about poor people and they can
built
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build
their mindset as a helping nature towards to poor people. Not only for current time but
also
in
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the future
this
types
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type
of activities
encourage
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encourages
to rich people that they do something for orphan like charity and
also
doing
such
social activities. Apart from
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it can
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help
to decrease
gap
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the gap
between poor and rich people. Both are
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participating
equally so they can easily know about their
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condition
and make a bonding with others properly. Now on the dark side, children get extra work load in teen ages, so they
can not
can not
cannot
tackle all
this
load in their mind. Because of
such
activities they could not get much time to focus on their studies
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children get
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distracted
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impact on their regular studies. In
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result, they
could not get better result what they want and get depressed from
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. To sum up, by doing
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these types
this type
of activities in high school, other societies
also
get encourage while
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seeing
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types
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type
of activities in children and
also
children can be full fill other's dreams.
Further more children
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Furthermore, children
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be
a helpful and kind person in future life while doing
such
types of activities

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