Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers .Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the past few

decades it

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decades, it

has been

undisputable

not open to question; obviously true

indisputable

that financial resources

has been

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have been

indispensable and prominent part of human well-being. A certain number of experts hold an opinion that adolescents adore to receive

money

as a present

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whereas multiple opinions postulate that

money

has

unpleasant impact

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an unpleasant impact

on teenagers

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Analysis of arguments in

favor

promote over another

favour

of both sides of the coin will be envisaged in the framework of

this

essay supported with my personal viewpoint. On the one hand, advocates of the monetary gifts adhere to their position that

money

become

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becomes

an integral part of contemporary society and almost every area requires

money

.

Hence

, it would be wise to give the

money

to juvenile’s birthday

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Another convincing argument in

favor

promote over another

favour

fewer

gifts of

money

is that tremendous and priceless opportunity to purchase desired items. An explanation lies on the fact that in most

cases parents

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cases, parents

have no exact ideas about children’s wish-list and buy items based on their desires.

However

, in reality, adolescents might not like purchased presents that were given

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even it could indeed be unnecessary stuffs.

On the other hand

, opponents of

money gifts

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money, gifts

see no prominent benefits of giving financial resources to teenager’s birth date, on the basis of several arguments.

First

and foremost, there is no absolute guarantee that teenagers will spend provided

money

on really useful items, since they might purchase drugs or alcohol beverages.

Besides

, a common scientific belief proves the harmful

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

of complimentary

money

to teenager’s psychology.

This

inevitably leads children to believe that

such

present is normal

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,

or even desirable and gradually the value of

money

will be lost. In the light of above mentioned arguments, it may be summarized

that albeit

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that, albeit

money

can provide numerous opportunities

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,

I

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personally reckon that there are

range

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ranges

of alternatives to

money

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monetary

gifts that would be actually helpful as long as present would be carefully chosen.