Today it is common for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays
,
Accept space
,
without
the full
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the fullness
the fulness
of technology, some businesses tend to meet, share and training on the Internet because they might think that would be easier not to spend time transporting to the other places. But
,
Accept space
,
in my opinion,
this
could be a disaster.
Firstly
, these businesses had been overused the Internet and in consequence, they will be
lazier
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lazy
and not positive in their work.
For instance
, they could not enjoy going outside, that means they are always
stay
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staying
at the office or at home. I
am not say
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am not saying
do not say
don't say
this
is
the bad
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the worst
views, but we have to avoid at least as we can. Meetings
should be meet
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should meet
should be met
in
live
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life
, that will stick everyone together and make a long-term believed. With me, I tend to agree that business should not take place online because it will make no sense of unite between companies and partner. They have to know how important it is, it will make
alot
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a lot
of
emotional
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emotions
for people
,
Accept space
,
help them to become friendlier in
live
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life
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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