You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter about the latest edition of your travel
magazine
where you published an article on Dhaka city on 3rd
Decembe
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December
, 2019. According to your
article
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the transport system of Dhaka is not up to mark which is a false
alligation
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allegation
as the rules and regulations
has
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been
stricted
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stricter
restricted
than before and there is a penalty if anyone breaks the rules. A reputed
magazine
like yours if published
such
type of false information
than
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there will be problems for the
traveler
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. Lots of people read the
magazine
like yours is which is influential. I am surprised that the news did not
checked
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prior
before
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publishe
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published
publishing
publisher
. I think that the least the
magazine
can do is to publish the correction and write an apology for the
misguidense
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misguidance
in the
next
month’s edition. I would
also
like to request you to ensure that all the factual
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information's
informations
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is
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thoroughly checked before
go
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for
publicatio
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publication
.
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faithfully Afsana Tazmin

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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