Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result
of i
ndustry revolution
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the industrial revolution
industrial revolution
and increasing technology, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many p
art
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parts
of our life.
This
change has several benefits but
also
, there are some serious disadvantages. The
first
of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work w
hole day
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the whole day
and more cheaper than p
erson.
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people
a person
In my view, after 50 y
ears most
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years, most
of career will be destroyed by them
Second
, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,
also
average earning money per each person will decrease. Everyone's lives will be harder than h
igh-tech century.
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a high-tech century
Lastly
, the rate of birth is going to decrease; people do not need to earn money and go outside. So, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.
On the other hand
, the
first
benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is more cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a m
ore high
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higher
highest
quality and low price things from f
actory.
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the factory
Secondly
, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,
as a result
of it, the cost of crops will decrease. T
han,
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Then
we can buy crops more cheap p
rise.
the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
price
Lastly
, our activities during leisure time will improve
such
as games, movies, dramas... . We can enjoy our break time more r
elaxable
even babies, elder citizens and f
amales.
a social unit living together
families
The i
ndustry
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industrial
industrious
revolution is making our life better,
h
owever there
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however, there
are
also
dangers. Please be careful to use them and d
evelope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
the level of life.

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