Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result

of i

ndustry revolution

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the industrial revolution

industrial revolution

and increasing technology, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many p

art

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parts

of our life.

This

change has several benefits but

also

, there are some serious disadvantages. The

first

of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work w

hole day

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the whole day

and more cheaper than p

erson.

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people

a person

In my view, after 50 y

ears most

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years, most

of career will be destroyed by them

Second

, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,

also

average earning money per each person will decrease. Everyone's lives will be harder than h

igh-tech century.

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a high-tech century

Lastly

, the rate of birth is going to decrease; people do not need to earn money and go outside. So, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.

On the other hand

, the

first

benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is more cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a m

ore high

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higher

highest

quality and low price things from f

actory.

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the factory

Secondly

, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,

as a result

of it, the cost of crops will decrease. T

han,

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Then

we can buy crops more cheap p

rise.

the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)

price

Lastly

, our activities during leisure time will improve

such

as games, movies, dramas... . We can enjoy our break time more r

elaxable

even babies, elder citizens and f

amales.

a social unit living together

families

The i

ndustry

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industrial

industrious

revolution is making our life better,

h

owever there

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however, there

are

also

dangers. Please be careful to use them and d

evelope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

the level of life.