Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result

of the industrial revolution and increasing technology, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many p

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parts

of our life.

This

change has several benefits but

also

, there are some serious disadvantages. The

first

of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work the whole day and more cheaply than p

erson.

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people

a person

In my view, after 50 y

ears most

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years, most

of career will be destroyed by them.

Second

, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,

also

average earning money per each person will decrease. Everyone's lives will be harder than h

igh-tech century.

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a high-tech century

Lastly

, the rate of birth is going to decrease; people do not need to earn money and go outside. So, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.

On the other hand

, the

first

benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a m

ore high

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higher

highest

quality and low price things from f

actory.

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the factory

Secondly

, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,

as a result

of it, the cost of crops will decrease.

Then

, we can buy crops in cheaper price.

Lastly

, our activities during leisure time will improve

such

as games, movies, dramas. We can enjoy our break time more relax even babies, elder citizens and families. In conclusion, the i

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industrial

revolution is making our life better,

however

there are

also

dangers. Please be careful to use them and developed the level of life.