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The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and lower the age limit for elderly ones. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, We can see traffic
accidents
 are increasing all over the world
due to
 many reasons. Many of the recent study shows that most of these
accidents
 are happening
due to
 irresponsible behaviour from the driver, at the same time, age is another major reason which can increase the risk of
accidents
.
However
, The
Government
 can reduce the risks by putting effective measures. In a nutshell, the age factor is a reason for
accidents
, but many are happening just because of driver mistakes, which
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due to
 alert failure. Rather than looking at
this
 factor,
firstly
, we need to look at the recent study to find out the irresponsible behaviour from
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the driver
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driver
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drivers
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such
 as drunk and
drive
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driving
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, using mobile phones
while
 driving,
sleep
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sleeping
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while
drive
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 etc. In order to reduce
accidents
, The
government
 should take necessary steps to monitor
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road safety by putting huge fines for violating laws.
In addition
 to
this
, more speed radars should be fixed in
accident prone
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violations. It's repeatedly reported that many youngsters are using vehicles on the road without
driving
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a driving
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 license,
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which could
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 lead to increasing road
accidents
. In order to avoid
this
, The
government
 should do
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random checking as it's a serious crime to drive without
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a licenses
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licenses
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license
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. At the same time, lowering the age limit for elderly ones can make a positive impact in reducing
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accidents
.
To conclude
, The question asked is a reason for traffic
accidents
, but, at the same time drivers should be monitored strictly by the
government
 authorities, in order to reduce the volume of
accidents
 in the future.
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