In some areas of US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion.

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Nowadays, the
crime
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rate has increased all over the world. It is true that late
night
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outside the house is not safe for teenagers,
however
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, it is the responsibility of the
government
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officals
a worker who holds or is invested with an office
officials
offices
to
propect
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
people. In my opinion, the
government
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have
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has
to take necessary actions to stop the violence rather than imposing curfew over teenagers. In the present world, no one is safer if it's children or even adults. The
crime
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had
incresed
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
increase
compared to
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last few years
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the last few years
. In
India
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India, for
for example
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,
recent reports states
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a recent report states
recent report states
that the violence
aganist
in contact with
against
women has raised addition to that, it happened mostly at
night
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.
This
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is the situation of most countries, where people fear to go out at
night
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.
However
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, it is the duty of the
government
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to take proper steps to handle
such
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situations. There are different laws to protect and provide
peacefull
not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war
peaceful
life to the citizens
eventhough
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, the implementation and
loupoles
an ambiguity (especially one in the text of a law or contract) that makes it possible to evade a difficulty or obligation
loopholes
set the criminals free.
For instance
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, there are lots of cases where the criminals released because they are
underaged
not of legal age
underage
when the
crime
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is
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
. It is essential that the
government
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should do needed to drop the
crime
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rate and
also
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assured punishment for the criminals. In conclusion, the parents get worried if their children were late to reach home at
night
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. The
government
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and the
officals
a worker who holds or is invested with an office
officials
offices
official
are trying to
building
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build
a secure and
peacefull
not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war
peaceful
world but still they not
succed
attain success or reach a desired goal
succeed
. I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that rather than restricting the youth from going out at
night
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, the officials should try to make the area a zero
crime
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zone.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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