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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them

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The table provides information about the
people
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person's
peoples'
peoples
expense
on
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for
 various items in five different countries, namely (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey) in the year 2002. Overall, the largest proportion of
countries
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the country's expense
country's expense
countries' expense
expense
 for each country was for food, drink and tobacco while
on the other hand
 the lowest
consumer
 expenditure was on leisure and education section in these five countries. A close look at the table, which reveals that
consumer
 spending on food, drink and tobacco was the
higest
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
highest
 in Turkey at 32.14%.
followed
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Followed
 by Ireland at 28.91%, and the lowest
expense
on
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of
 the same items was 15.77%, in Sweden. Spain and Italy had 18.80% and 16.36%,
expense
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an expense
 which was slightly
higher than Sweden
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higher than in Sweden
 at that time. On clothing and footwear, Italy
consumer
 spending was the utmost 9.00%, whereas Spain, Turkey and Ireland
expense
 was almost similar 6.51%, 6.63% and 6.43%,
repectively
in the order given
respectively
. Sweden spends less on clothing and
footwer
clothing worn on a person's feet
footwear
 like only 5.40%. On leisure and education turkey people spend 4.35%, whereas Italy and Sweden
consumer
expense
 was nearly same
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I
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E
 3.20%, and 3.22%, respectively. Spain had the lowest amount of spending on leisure and education
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%, followed closely by Ireland with a figure of 2.21%.

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