Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society . other , however , believe that school is the place to learn this . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
Parents are the
role
models for children because they are introducing the world to them. An array of people thinks that parents must educate their children to make a good person in society
While others think that school is the place where children can get values about society
life
. This
essay will discuss both sides of arguments in details and it provides an evidence as to why parents play a vital role
in the development of their child life
.
Parents are the buildings
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building
bolcks
for their a solid piece of something (usually having flat rectangular sides)
blocks
books
children
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child's
life
because they are the first
induviduals
who give a human being
individuals
guidence
for their something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
guidance
life
. Childhod
is the significant period of Suggestion
Childhood
everyones
life
because it paves a fundation
for their the basis on which something is grounded
foundation
behavior
.In manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Childhod
parents are closely connected to the time of person's life when they are a child
childhood
childere's
Suggestion
coders'
life
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life, hence
hence
they can make a good impact in
child Suggestion
on
behavior
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For example
,
if a child Accept space
,
resepct
their parents(usually preceded by 'in') a detail or point
respect
,
they will respect the Accept space
,
society
beacuse
they get the moral values from their parents. for the reason that; on account of
because
Morover
in addition
Moreover
,
Most of the children have the tendency to Accept space
,
immitate
their parentsreproduce someone's behavior or looks
imitate
.
Accept space
.
while
they are adopting Suggestion
While
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
qualites
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
qualities
from
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of
parents parents
are indirectly Accept comma addition
parents, parents
teach
moral Suggestion
taught
priciples
to a basic generalization that is accepted as true and that can be used as a basis for reasoning or conduct
principles
principals
principle
thier
of them or themselves
their
childern
. To go a young person of either sex
children
indetail
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into detail
in detail
,
communication style Accept space
,
is varies
from person to person depending up Suggestion
varies
is varied
has varied
is varying
n
the culture of located at or attached to
on
in
and
thire
family. of them or themselves
their
there
if
the parents having good control over communication Suggestion
If
childern
a young person of either sex
children
willinherit
those values
Teachers play an important Suggestion
will inherit
role
in society
building, but their role
is limited, whereas it mainly restrict with in the walls of the school. The teacher can teach values to students, but it depends on them whether they have to accept it or ignore it.Teachers having some limitatin
because inherited behavioural qualities cannot be controlled to a limit. a principle that limits the extent of something
limitations
limitation
For example
, if a students
Suggestion
student
get
moral values from teachers, but if their family is totally discouraging Suggestion
gets
then
its not worth. In
addition teachers
Accept comma addition
addition, teachers
are mainly concentrated
on Suggestion
mainly concentrate
accdemic sucess
of students rather than Suggestion
the academic success
academic sucess
academic success
academics sucess
accdemic success
accdemic successes
students
Suggestion
students'
student
student's
sucess
as a citizen in the an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
society
. Role
of a teacher is limited in school to guide thier
students of them or themselves
their
eventhough
teachers concentrate more on Suggestion
even though
accadamic
rather than values. associated with academia or an academy
academic
academics
For example
, School duration is limited to cover accadamic
topic and make them to face exam
associated with academia or an academy
academic
challenges
rather than Suggestion
Challenges
society
values
In conclusion, Parents make a good citizen through their guidance. Parents are the role
models for thier
children hence
they can make an impact in thier
life
while role
of a teacher is limited in their accadamic life
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