Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

Criminals will be held in a prison to make them a better

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person, but

unfortunately keeping them in a

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makes them more dreadful and convicting more crimes once after they were released from the

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. In the essay, I am going to discuss about the causes of

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and the effects will have on society. The real cause behind their behaviour change after they are released from the

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is because they are far from their family or friends over the period of time and most of the

jail

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's will not provide them minimum facilities like Water or clean Restrooms or any medical assistance required.

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kind of attitude towards them

indirectly encouraging

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indirectly encourages

is indirectly encouraging

to perform additional crimes.

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, one of my

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friend's

father had done a theft in his nearby home and once the case was proved, he was kept in a

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for about 6 months. After his return, due to bad treatment towards him in the

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, he was more violent and started doing more crimes than he was doing before. Many people who had been kept in the

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try for a new

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later his return if he or she loses the existing one. Every company or any business organisation checks his past history and only offers a

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if they had never been to a

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.

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makes them quite tough and these requirements will make a huge impact on that in individual as well as for the society. Money which comes from them to the government in terms of tax money is lost and

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may slow down the whole countries or

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states'

state's

progress.

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, A survey from economic times stated that more than 85% of the

past prisoners

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past, prisoners

from the year 2011 cannot find a new

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in India and

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incurred a loss of around 10 million dollars for the government in terms of taxes and from other sources. In conclusion, the criminals who had kept in the

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should be provided with minimum facilities including in the areas of food and health to keep them in a good shape.

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government

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the government

should impose a strict law to not to check a

persons

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person's

criminal background before offering a

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and try to disable the access which provides the crime information about the candidate.