..We have been living in the nuelear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

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For more than fifty years since the discovery of nuclear
technology
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, the world has been in constant threat of total destruction by those in possession of nuclear weapons.
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technology
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has brought about
notable breakthrough
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a notable breakthrough
notable breakthroughs
in the fields of Medicine and
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alternate power sources
an alternate power source
, the threat it poses to the continuity of life on earth is still a reality, and
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essay analyses that. Perhaps the most dreaded impact associated with nuclear
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is the outbreak of nuclear wars.  With the current tension between the two world super powers, which arguably are
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US and Russia, and the constant threats of nuclear attack from both governments, any slight military provocation could escalate into a WAR  with atomic bombs and missiles that have a CATACLYSMIC effect. THE CONSEQUENCE OF
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DAMAGE AS
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they could wipe out more than half of the life on Earth.
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, the radiation that would be emitted therefrom could contaminate all surface waters and
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render the atmosphere unlivable for the few lives that may survive. The end result of all these would make living on Earth impossible.
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, nuclear science has brought about remarkable achievements in medical diagnostics and intervention.
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, nuclear imaging and radiotherapy, which are all products of nuclear
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, have greatly improved the diagnosis and treatment of different types of cancers.
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, cancer patients' survival rate has substantially increased from 5% to 50
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, there is currently a
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shift towards nuclear power plants as an alternative to carbon fuels.
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is so because the former is more environmentally friendly, and will in the long term halt the process of global warming. All of
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have been possible without nuclear
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. In conclusion, the discovery of nuclear energy
has indeed revolutionised
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the health and energy
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industries, however
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, the inherent risk associated with it when compared to the benefits is terrifying and
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, strict laws should be put in place to regulate its usage.

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