Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time.others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

According to some individuals, guardians ought to motivate their youngsters to partake in arran

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arranging

p activities at their leisure time. other

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ple think that it is essential for young adults to study how to keep themselves busy. In my opinion,

although

innate skills might be discovered, youns

gters can

a young person of either sex

youngsters

attain success by studying. Motivation by mothe

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the mother

a mother

father is necessary. Some people base their argument on the fact that talents can be found when teenagers play with each other.

This

is because children can showcase their natural ability when they are allowed to interact with their peer.

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peers

reat deal of adolescents who are now professional were discovered while engaging in sport

ing activity

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sporting activities

a sporting activity

such

as football. To illustrate, A super falcon player, Asisat Oshoala, who

also

plays for Barcelona, was scouted by an agent that recruit players.

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recruiter

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always goes

nd looking for talented youngsters, so they were able to discover her due to her performance. Arguing differently, Some others believe that children that keep themselves busy have time to study, and

this

type of youngsters are a

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of surpassing excellence

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t of them are invol

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involved

chool competitions which encourages them to work harder. Dedicating certain hours after school work studying

instead

of engaging in varie

ty of a

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a variety

ctivities with friends might help updating themselves.

For example

, My nephew, who is in grade 4, represented his school for all competition, and has be re

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been

rded with several awards. He reads for two hours every

day

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every day

Hence

, creating time

out

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a time

of one's comfort zone is prominent In conclusion, event

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even though

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or insp

ires their young ones in group activities, I believe that determining innermost ability through hardw

ork is e

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hard work

ssential.