The quality of computer language translation has improved significantly in recent years. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Globally information technology has greatly improved
language
translation
in the present years,
as a resu
lt many fee
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result, many
l it is a waste of time and effort to be able to communicate in a foreign
language
. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
,
howe
ver I
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however, I
also
believe that the impact of information technology cannot be completely ruled out. Access to
comp
uter is
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computers
a computer
the computer
limited in many countries of the world today and many of these countries cannot rely solely on
computer
that are unavailable to communicate.
For example
, in many parts of Nigeria today, most farmers and low-income earners cannot afford to buy computers.
Additionally
, Most computers are sophisticated and difficult to operate. Communication via these types of comp
uters especially for
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computers, especially
non-educated individuals may be an h
er
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a
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Herculean
k.
Fina
lly it is
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Finally, it
cheaper to learn a foreign
language
than to purchase and maintain computers. Not all
comp
uter hav
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computers
e features of
language
translations, the latest models that have
such
features are expensive and may require monthly subscriptions to enjoy the
translation
features,
as a resu
lt many peo
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result, many
ple who cannot afford
this
will have to learn a foreign
language
to be able to communicate effectively.
On the other hand
,
computer
language
translation
has helped to break communication and
language
barriers in various aspects of life. Take
for instance
, in the movie indu
stry many of
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industry, many
these films today have features of subtitles which make it easier for viewers to better understand these movies. Through
computer
language
translation
, verbal communication has
also
greatly improved. In conclusion,
computer
language
translation
is one of the greatest and useful invention in the world of information technology in recent year
s but to
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years, but
say children should not learn a foreign
language
because of
this
should not be encouraged.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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