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benedicta: Question : Some people believe that Is best to accept a bad situation such as, unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Humans generally experience both favourable and unfavourable conditions at different stages in life. While some may think accepting bad circumstances is better than trying to change them, ot
hers
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others, however
however
 argue that finding a way out is always the best.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument and state reasons why the latter is better. On the one hand, the current situation of ec
onomy h
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the economy
as gripped the human mind with the fear of the unknown, and
this
 is the major reason why people choose to accept an un
favorable s
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
ituation. An effort made towards change could end up paying off or causing a se
t back,
an unfortunate happening that hinders or impedes; something that is thwarting or frustrating
setback
which could be worse than the previous condition.
For instance
, a staff of Mc
Donald's restaurant,
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the Mc Donald's restaurant
a Mc Donald's restaurant
who felt he was being underpaid filed a complaint with management and ended up being dismissed from the establishment.
This
 could have been avoided if he had been content, but rather, he chose not to, which led to a worse off predicament.
On the other hand
, accepting bad situations could lead to being taken for granted by em
ployers especially t
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employers, especially
hose who deliberately try to exploit the employee. Some employers of la
bor d
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
eliberately try to un
der pay t
pay too little
underpay
heir staff and only have a change of heart when called to order. To illustrate, the current regional manager of Zenith Bank Plc was once a teller at the bank, but was made to perform the duties of a branch manager without any increment in salary or acknowledgement for the work done, he only got promoted after he put in his resignation stating his grievance with the organisation. Refusing to accept a bad condition and speaking up most especially when your relevance is known improves the situation. In conclusion,
although
 the chances of receiving a positive feedback from revolting is
u
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are
ncertain, it is best to challenge whatever un
favorable c
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
ondition one finds himself as he could prevent being exploited by recruiters and owners of establishments.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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