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Topic : children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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It is commonly said that child of today are facing rigorous pressures fr
om a
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of
cademic, social and commercial outlooks.
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tend t
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intends
is intended
o explain the causes and solutions to alleviate these problems. Juveniles must be protected from
such
 mounting pressures.
To begin
 with, there my
raid o
too numerous to be counted
myriad
f academic pressures in the present scenario. Children are not competing with someone
next
 door or within the country. They are competing with the contemporary global village. The big planet of yesterday is now a well-linked global village. Parents wa
nts t
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want
o excel their adolescents in every field. They send them to be
st
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better
schools where their bags are much heavier than themselves. After school they have tuitions. They don't have time to bloom and show their hidden talents.
Moreover
, there ar
e
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is
also
 pl
ethora o
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a plethora
f social and commercial pressures. Children want to adopt mo
dern life style but t
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a modern life style, but
a modern life style but
the modern life style but
heir parents confine them to traditions. Sometimes
this
 restriction ma
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makes
hem rebel against the rules laid by their parents. They
also
 have peer groups. Peer groups transfer good or bad habits in children. If these groups are bad
then
 it can je
uparadise t
pose a threat to; present a danger to
jeopardize
jeopardise
he ch
ilds.
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child's
child
Co
mmercialy,
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Commercial
Commercially
Commercials
when they see many new things in ma
rket w
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the market
markets
ith their peers and want to buy th
em but w
Accept comma addition
them, but
hen they are unable to buy them
then
 they get st
ress.
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stressed
 Solutions must be taken against
such
 rising pressures. Parents should take care of their ch
ilds a
a young person of either sex
children
child's
child
l
ot.
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a lot
Guardians expectations should be limited from their ch
ildrens.
a young person of either sex
children
children's
The big onus is
also
 on schools and teachers. They should motivate them to strive to bring great results. They should teach them about the concept of win or loss because often in case of loss they get st
ress.
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stressed
 To summarize, I reiterated my perspective that ch
ildrens m
a young person of either sex
children
ust be shielded from
such
 pressures because these stresses can produce hazardous effects on their life and stifle the physical and psychological growth of juveniles.

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