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School teaching should focus on the success of the workforce and less importance should be given to academic acheivement.To what extent do you agree?

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The line illustrates the average price that people who live in America spent money to buy mobile and landline
phone
 services annually during 2001 to 2010. Overall, the cost of mobile hand
phone
 services a
re rapidly increased
Suggestion
is rapidly increased
while the expenditure of landline
phone
 a
re gently decreased
Suggestion
is gently decreased
for 10 years. In 2001, the cost of cell
phone
 services which w
ere gradually increased
Suggestion
was gradually increased
were 200$ while the landline
phone
 services which were gently declined were around 700$. Following 5 years, the costs of cell
phone
 services and residential services became approximately 400$ and 550$ respectively. In 2006, the both of them met and became same level of expenditures
such
 as almost 500$. After that point, the both of them shows s
ame trends
Suggestion
the same trends
with before. In 2010, the price of cell
phone
 r
each
Suggestion
reaches
the pick
such
 as over than 700$ whereas the expense of the residential
phone
 hit the bottom which is approximately 400$.

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