Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extend do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantage?

As industrial revolution and technology increase, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many parts of our life.
This
change has several benefits but
also
, there are some serious disadvantages. The
first
of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work the whole day and more cheaper than a person. Because of
this
problem, finding job will be more difficult.
Second
, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,
also
average earning money per each person will
decrease
. Everyone's lives will be harder than a high-tech century.
Lastly
, the rate of birth is going to
decrease
; people do not need to earn money and go outside.
Also
, it can
decrease
the chance to meet each other, so, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.
On the other hand
, the
first
benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a higher quality and low price things from the factory.
Secondly
, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,
as a result
of it, the cost of crops will
decrease
.
Then
, we can buy crops cheaper price.
Lastly
, our activities during leisure time will improve
such
as games, movies, dramas. We can enjoy our break time more relax even babies, elder citizens and females. In conclusion, the industrial revolution is making our life better,
however
, there are
also
dangers. In my view, after 50 years, most of career will be destroyed by them, so, please be careful to use them and develop the level of life.

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