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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent you agree or diagree with this statement. You should write at least 250 words.

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Today's world is the world of choices much different from the past
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In today's age and the day we have a number of options
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In
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 essay
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 will examine to how much extent I agree or disagree.I completely agree that in
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 we have
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lots
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 of alternatives.
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the option
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 there in
every thing
all things
everything
 starting from minor to large things in every field we have a variety of choices to select
for instance
, we can eat
any thing
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anything
 we want
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every country has different specialities
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we can wear
any thing
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anything
 formal to informal no one can claim us for our
this
 act
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Moreover
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 coming towards our career different universities offer different courses from which one can choose according to his ability and choice. At the moment
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 people can opt any lifestyle, food,
clothing whatever
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clothing, whatever
 they want while, in past young ones follows the same as their elders
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, time has much changed up
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 now
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As it was the trend in the past that children will follow the same job of their father when they grew up
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no one feels bad for
this
 situation because options were not there for them or they were not allowed to share their interests. In conclusion, nowadays people have a range of choices and I agree with that.
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