You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
DEAR SIR/MADAM, I AM WRITING
THIS
Linking Words
LETTER TO ADDRESSED SOME MENACE IN YOUR BADMINTON SPORTS ACADEMY CENTER WHICH
IHAVE
Correct your spelling
I HAVE
FOUND DURING MY
LAST
Linking Words
VISITE
Correct your spelling
VISIT
show examples
ON SUNDAY. I AM
SEFALI
Correct your spelling
SHEFALI
PATEL, I HAVE BEEN YOUR BADMINTON
SPORT
Change the noun form
SPORTS
show examples
CLUB MEMBER SINCE 1999 WHERE I USED TO COME EVERY WEEKEND TO
PRCTICE
Correct your spelling
PRACTICE
MY SPORTS SKILLS. I HAVE NEVER NOTICED
SUCH
Linking Words
ISSUES BEFORE, BUT SINCE
LAST
Linking Words
TWO
VISITES
Correct your spelling
VISITS
, I HAVE
MARLKED
Correct your spelling
MARKED
SOME PROBLEMS WITH HANGER SPACE AND DIRTY FLOOR INSIDE THE CHANGING
ROOM
Use synonyms
. WHEN I WENT INSIDE THE CHANGING
ROOM
Use synonyms
I FOUND THAT THERE
WERE
Change the verb form
WAS
show examples
NO PLACE TO HANG MY
Correct your spelling
CLOTHES
show examples
CLOTHS
Correct your spelling
CLOTHES
show examples
EVEN THE FLOOR WAS DIRTY TOO.
HENCE
Linking Words
, I COULD
KEPT
Change the verb form
KEEP
show examples
THE CLOTH ON THE FLOOR AS WELL. TO SOLVE
Linking Words
THIS
Correct determiner usage
THESE
show examples
ISSUES I WOULD SUGGEST IS YOU REPLACE THE LOCK OF ALL THE CHANGING
Use synonyms
ROOM
Fix the agreement mistake
ROOMS
show examples
WOULD BE GREAT AND I ADVISE YOU TO HAVE HANGERS FOR EACH
ROOM
Use synonyms
AS WELL FOR THE CUSTOMER'S
CONVINIENCE
Correct your spelling
CONVENIENCE
.
ADDITIONALLY
Linking Words
, HAVE
THE
Correct article usage
A
show examples
PROFESSIONAL CLEANING STAFF FOR
Correct your spelling
HOUSEKEEPING
show examples
HOUSE KEEPING
Correct your spelling
HOUSEKEEPING
show examples
.
THIS
Linking Words
MAKE THE CUSTOMER
HASSALE
Correct your spelling
HASSELL
HASSLE
FREE AND FASTER CHANGING TIME. I HOPE ON MY
NEXT
Linking Words
Correct your spelling
VISIT
show examples
VISITE
Correct your spelling
VISIT
show examples
I WOULD HAVE THE PROPER LOCKING DEVICE AND
SOME PLACE
Correct your spelling
SOMEPLACE
show examples
TO HANG MY THINGS.
LOOKINGB
Correct your spelling
LOOKING
FORWARD TO SEE THE CHANGE IN THE
SPORT
Change the noun form
SPORTS
show examples
CENTER ON MY
NEXT
Linking Words
VISITE
Correct your spelling
VISIT
show examples
.
Correct the word
YOURS
show examples
YOUR
Correct your spelling
YOURS
show examples
SINCERELY,
SEFALI
Correct your spelling
SHEFALI
PATEL
Submitted by drsefalipatel on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: