In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150?

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, their kids and close family members. Professionally, people can gain more experience in their field of expertise and can share it with the rest of the world. Imagine if Edison or Newto

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ed longer, the amount of contributions in the field of science will be gigantic. On a negative side, people

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Topic Vocabulary:

longevity
life expectancy
scientific advancements
experience
personal goals
loved ones
knowledge
wisdom
contributions
advancements
fear of death
appreciation for life

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