Recently published figures shows that the wildlife populations around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world.

Newly printed figures depict that the population of
wildlife
around the globe has declined by nearly fifty percent over the
last
five decades. By building more natural animal parks and discouraging deforestation around the world would help to protect the
wildlife
. With the recent trend in
civilization leading
Accept comma addition
civilization, leading
to destruction of
wildlife
's niche, building
more natural zoo
Suggestion
a more natural zoo
in all countries across the globe will help to converse wild animals. Animal parks that resembles their natural
habitat
will help to protect them from poachers as well as prevent their extinction. National Geographic Wild recently reported that New Zealand newly improved animal park has aided to protect the
wildlife
from illegal hunting.
Wildlife
inhabiting in a secured
park
Suggestion
parking
will increase their rate of survival and
also
preserve the endangering species.
Hence
, constructing more ingenious zoo will not only
guard but
Accept comma addition
guard, but
also
prevent the extinction of
this animals
Suggestion
these animals
this animal
.
Moreso
, discouraging deforestation will
also
assist to protect the
wildlife
.
This
will aid to conserve their natural
habitat
and prevent unnecessary death of
this animals
Suggestion
these animals
this animal
in the wild. Leading to them thriving more and increase their rate of reproduction.
For instance
, according to BBC news
,
Accept space
,
in other to prevent global warming, Syndey, a state in Australia has passed a bill against
unwarranted clearing
Suggestion
the unwarranted clearing
of forest, which they said directly preserve their
wildlife
and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
habitat
.
Thus
, discouraging denudation will help to safeguard the
wildlife
,
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
habitat
and
also
increase their
birthrate
Suggestion
birth rate
. To conclude, constructing
more natural animal park
Suggestion
a more natural animal park
and discouraging
desertification
will assist in safeguarding the
wildlife
and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
niche across the globe.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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