You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it,
İn the workplace
the
accurate approach should be helpful. The Correct article usage
an
indisputably
truth is Change the adverb
indisputable
people
around you behave you like how they are being treated by you. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
i
would say every attitude base on you and up to you.
Unfortunately, at the present Change the capitalization
I
time
we have more pretentious. stingy, unsocial humans around us. Add a comma
,time
Hence
, recently the importance of Linking Words
good
attitude is much more essential than it was. The main reason for that Correct article usage
a good
psycology
is. Raising in a good mood is so vital and effective for your future character. When The Correct your spelling
psychology
people
who Use synonyms
were not behaved
well, Change to the active voice
did not behave
have not behaved
attented
the new atmosphere or the new environment even if they were welcomed well, they usually never get used to it. Somehow they might be grown badly. Correct your spelling
attended
Then
they might perform weird behaviours Linking Words
such
as not helping Linking Words
people
, ruining the atmosphere at work or disturb Use synonyms
the
colleagues. Change the word
their
Moreover
, the other reason Linking Words
for
nowadays Change preposition
apply
people
have Use synonyms
deficiency
of interaction skills is technology. Many of adolescence is definitely either computer addict or mobile phone. Add an article
a deficiency
Thus
, it makes them unsocial so that when they have a job they cannot have work Linking Words
conversation
even confabulation. I would like to give an example Fix the agreement mistake
conversations
for
Change preposition
of
this
situation. I was dependent on Linking Words
computer
and television when Fix the agreement mistake
computers
i
was Change the capitalization
I
at
primary and secondary school. As far as ı remember my Change preposition
in
first
job, Linking Words
i
could not even talk with my colleagues because ı was not eligible for communication. Somehow , Change the capitalization
I
fortunately
I get rid of my troubles.
Add a comma
,fortunately
On
conclusion, I would like to give Change preposition
In
advise
about that. İn my Replace the word
advice
opinion
there should be a Add a comma
,opinion
preperation
year for Correct your spelling
preparation
job
and it might be called ‘’ awaken your social aspect’’ so that Correct article usage
a job
people
will feel comfortable when they start working.Use synonyms
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.