Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly media

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Undoubtedly, media

coverage is still

huge ongoing problem

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a huge ongoing problem

the huge ongoing problem

in celebrities life. Whereas according to many people it is all about the cost of holding reputations

conversely

for the rest of them it is just

a

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an

overwhelming thing.

To begin

with,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would like to give an instance

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of

my life. Once my friend was dating with famous

girl

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girl, however

however

girl’s parents did not know

this

relationship.

Then

one night they went to the night club afterwards while they were leaving the club they took the pictures of them and her father learnt together with from

this

moment he did not let my friend to date

wtih

expresses the means used

with

his girl. The consequences were catastrophic because her father forbidden to get out and hang out with her friends and she got fired.

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Which

Wich

is definitely not fair circumstance.

Thus

, everything come with its responsibilities

therefore

maybe you might think it is just about the cost that you need to pay due to have a reputation.

However i

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However, I

However I

think the costs should not occur the unfair facts, it might merely bring the

rigors

something hard to endure

rigours

rings

and obligations. As many people do,

famaous

widely known and esteemed

famous

people should can stroll around the town they need to go walkabout to get some fresh air. Unfortunately, at

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at the

a the

present time they can just sit at the home after work, they are not able to go out with their children comfortably.

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In

conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would like to call out to the media staffs to not disturb

famaous person

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the famous person

famous person

. They should have

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not divided or shared with others

exclusive

life, they can have

girlfirend

a girl or young woman with whom a man is romantically involved

girlfriends

, children, pets

also

they can go out as normal people do.