The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials Thea were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials Thea were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
This
chart illustrates the percentage of paper and cardboard, glass containers,
aluminum
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cans and plastic that were recycled in
special
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county
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between 1982 and 2010 measured by
percent
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. In 1994 the proportion of paper and cardboard
has
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reached its peak at exactly eighty
percent
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,
while
it is obvious that it was at
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point at almost
sixty five
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in 1990. On the other side, in 1990 the proportion of glass containers
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decreased
at
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exactly forty
percent
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and it was increasing after 1994, receptively.
In addition
,
among
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1982 and 2010 the proportion of
aluminum
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cans
has
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increased until
its
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reached
to
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around
forty five
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percent
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. Regarding
to
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ratio between 1990 and 2010 of plastics, the figure was steady at approximately ten
percent
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.
Overall
, as we have seen, the graph explains several
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in four sectors
in particular
interval
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The graph b

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