The first car appeared on the British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

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Cars take

considerably place

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a considerable place

considerable place

in people’s Daily life. Cars make people’s life easier because travelling became substantially comfortable with driving them. In

this

case, cars have lots of positive and negative sides as everything. In my opinion, cars have much more positive sides rather than

it’s

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

negative

sides but

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sides, but

if people know how to

use

cars. If people don’t know how to

use

cars, the result can be end of

finishing

the end of a word (a suffix or inflectional ending or final morpheme)

ending

someone’s life.

This

case is not only for human beings.

Also

animals and other

alives

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

can be affected by

this

situation.

For instance

, if someone drives a car

uncarefully

, he or she can crash to another alive. It doesn’t matter if there

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are

human being or not. People shouldn’t be serial killer by cars. That’s why governments should be very

carefull

exercising caution or showing care or attention

careful

about driving. Governments should check if

driver

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a driver

the driver

has driving license or not. If the driver

do not have

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does not have

license, government should give punishment to the driver.

On the other hand

, population of

World

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the world

the World

is increasing markedly, because of that,

numbers

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the numbers

of cars

also

inreasing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

considerably. Global warming is increasing day by day and cars take huge place in

this

situation. Cars are harming ozone layer with releasing

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

. If

this

situation continues like

this

next generation

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the next generation

will not have healthy earth. To prevent atmosphere, governments should encourage alternative transport forms.

Electrical

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Electric

cars can be

best

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the best

example

for

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that and people should

use

public transports

instead

of their own car if possible. In conclusion, people should know how to

use

cars for health of

alives

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

and governments should take some prevention to save atmosphere and earth.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

269 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The first car appeared on the British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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