Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times
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shopping online is the major trend.
This
essay believes that there are numerous benefits that surpass the drawbacks because of convenience and it saves
time
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Firstly
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most consumers find it extremely stressful shopping
ie
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
going out of their comfort zones
as a result
of their busy schedules and their various engagements. Shopping online
is very stress
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is very stressing
is very stressed
-free and convenient for people as just with a click
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they are able to buy whatever they want to get.
for
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For
example
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due to
my
objective form of "I"
me
mine
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work busy
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Busy work
Work busy
schedule as a doctor, I forgot my favourite's
cousins
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cousin's
birthday was just the
next
day as I got a late notification from my Facebook account. I went to the internet and immediately order for a cake
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paid and requested it should be delivered to his doorstep and I was
also
able to shop for some shirts and tie conveniently inside my bedroom.
Secondly
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it saves
alot
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a lot
of
time
because of the large crowds and
ques especially
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queues, especially
queues especially
during weekends
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it becomes difficult meeting up some other crucial things one needs to fulfil.
for
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For
example
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I shop for groceries
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stationeries for my kids
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and most times for my parents all at one goal and I am still able to keep up with other appointments within a short period of
time
. In conclusion
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shopping via the internet has enormous
benefits
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benefits, hence
hence
making our lives more convenient and stress-free
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and saves
alot
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a lot
of our
time
in our
hustlings
cause to move furtively and hurriedly
hustling
and bustling day-day lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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