Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some will agree with the point that
luck
plays a vital role to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
endeveours
.
Simultaneoulsy some
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Simultaneously, some
Simultaneously some
will deny
this
and will stick on talent and
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
are the keys to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
success. My opinion is both
luck
and
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
is important in fulfilling any task.
Luck
cannot be
measured but
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measured, but
it is useful
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
even we are doing much
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
,
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,
at the right stage or situation we may encounter challenges with environment, natural calamities, or physical injuries like accidents or ill health. So some will stick to the fact that stars should be
alingned
brought into agreement or cooperation on the side of a faction, party, or cause
aligned
perfectly for doing any task. If we come across in sports, sportsmen will work harder to play a wonderful
game but
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game, but
if
any ill
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any, ill
health comes before
fhe
definite article
the
game things will change. To accomplish the tasks or to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
our goals
luck
plays a vital role.
On the contrary
,
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,
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
and talent are the keys
to
Suggestion
to achieving
to achieve
achive
our goals without
luck
. If we plan everything prior to
tasks
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tasks, then
then
we can
defineltly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
achieved
achieves
goals.
Luck
is something which is not under human control and thought. My opinion is
luck
is a
beleif
any cognitive content held as true
belief
and
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
is our attention and vision to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
our goals
.
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.
These two should work
collabaratively
accomplished by collaboration
collaboratively
as one will enhances the
physocologial
standards like stress relief as the other will enhances the physical potentiality in
fullfiling
put in effect
fulfilling
the tasks and
also
in
acheiving
to gain with effort
achieving
goals. One should always possess and believe in both
luck
and
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
.
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.

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