one problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion.give the reasons for that and also provide the solutions.

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traffic congestion
urban population
public transportation
urban planning
infrastructure
economic strength
consumerism
car ownership
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peak hours
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ride-sharing
remote work
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one problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion.give the reasons for that and also provide the solutions.

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In some counntries, the cost of living is rapidly increasing. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What effects might this have on society?

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Plastic bags, plastic bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.