Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples.

International sporting
events
do a lot for cultural understanding and
economical
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development among the global family.
However
, the staging of major international sporting spectacles is not entirely positive.
Thus
, the opinions surrounding whether international sporting
events
contribute positively to a country or not will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. It is believed by many that countries
who
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host major international sporting
events
reap numerous rewards. Take the Beijing Olympics of 2008,
for example
. These Olympic games greatly helped China to shed its
twentieth century
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status as an incapable, political mess.
This
positive change to the
country’s
image did a lot to encourage international trade partners, who may have been weary of the
country’s
capabilities
otherwise
.
Thus
, it is clear why many people around the world want their country to host an international sporting event.
However
, there are other groups who feel internationally held sporting
events
do more harm than good to a country.
For example
, the Formula 1 race held annually in various cities around the world is often criticized for its insensitive nature towards the environment. As the racetracks are only used once a year, many feel
this
wastes the huge stretches of land they sit on, land that would perhaps be better used for residential purposes.
Thus
, it is understandable why many do not support their
country’s
foray into international
sporting
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. After looking at both sides of the argument, it is felt that a
country’s
participation in international sporting
events
is much more positive than negative. It is hoped international sport can help promote cultural understanding.

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