The chart below compares levels of recycling, as well as some less environmentally friendly forms of waste management, in fifteen European countries. Summarise it.
The bar
chart
shows the percentage of waste
that is
recycled, put into landfill
and incinerated in various EU countries
.
If we look at the chart
broadly, it is clear that
more waste
goes to landfill
than to any other ones. In fact, while
around half of the Correct word choice
apply
countries
mentioned in the chart
put the majority of their waste
in landfill
sites, and only two countries
recycle almost half of their waste
.
Austria and Belgium are the most environmentally friendly countries
among the fifteen countries
, recycling around 60% and 50% respectively. Germany, Sweden and Denmark are
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have also seen
also
seen partly
Change preposition
as partly
environmental
friendly Change the word
environmentally
countries
, with recycling around 40% of their waste
.
Other EU countries
recycle far less than the others mentioned above. Greece, Ireland and the UK, for example
, only recycle around %10 of their total waste
,
and put between 80 and 90% of their total Remove the comma
apply
waste
into landfill
areas. Finally
, while
non-environment friendly countries
in the chart
generally prefer to put most of their waste
into landfill
sites, Luxembourg, Sweden, the Netherlands and Denmark, incinerate waste
more that
they bury.Correct word choice
than
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