Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these places?

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seems that

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

are more interested in historical places and museums than residents.

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are some reasons behind

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and some feasible measures can be taken to attract more people in these places.

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essay will look at causes for

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and propose some solutions.

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issue might be attributable to two main reasons.

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local inhabitants are already familiar with their culture and having the experience of living in

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place and learn about it

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schools

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therefor

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, visiting these places

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does not present

new information to them

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contrast, tourists are really curious about the destination and they are on holiday so it is obvious that they have the time and money to spend on historical sites.

furthermore

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, cultural and historical places often charge an entry fee, which is in some cases expensive for low-income or even middle-income visitors. It will discourage them from going to museums and see repetitive artworks and ancient memento. Some practical solutions are suggested to mitigate the problem.

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, the way forward might be to hold cultural events or galleries or at museums or historical sites to attract residents to these places.

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good example of

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happened 3 years ago in Tehran

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national

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museum of Iran hosted louver relics.

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cooperation leads to an increase in the number of local visitors that year.

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encouraging more people to come to museums, local authorities can provide special discounts for the locals

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the weekends or even free tickets in certain days of a year.

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in all, I believe local people are not as motivated as tourists to visit their historical places because they don't have time or money and they do not find it an interesting place to visit

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I see it, governments have a role to play in absorbing people's interest.

Wed Jan 08 2020

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these places?

Fully explain your ideas

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.

While studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one’s experience, as also present the danger of letting influence from the host culture. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.