The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person. Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects?

Today, the question of whether the proliferation of

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has an adverse or positive effect on social relationships among people has been receiving a great deal of public attention.

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the great advancement of

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, especially communication technologies, is not without its detrimental impacts on the social relationships, its benefits

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engaging and

conntecting

connect, fasten, or put together two or more pieces

connecting

people should be more considered. Several demerits can be pointed out

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the fact that

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harms human social relationships to some extent.

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, if a person has an excessive exposure to the virtual world, he or she will be more inclined to abuse social media to have an interaction with others, either with relatives or with acquaintances, rather than maintaining real social interactions. Plenty of evidence shows that

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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will reduce the quality of human relationships, which in turn destroys them in the near future.

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,

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keeps people busy in the virtual world, and there is too little time for them to nurture their social relationships. Obviously, a lot of people devote their time and effort to working continuously because

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allows them to boost their productivity, and

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proves one thing that their shrinking time fund will not allow them to build or to maintain their social relationships on a regular basis.

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, many people have concluded that

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the technology

makes people

seperated

being or feeling set or kept apart from others

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, and even

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users become socially isolated.

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, those arguments are flawed because the

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advancement augments social relationship rather than undermines them.

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, since the proliferation of

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has made the communication among people accessible, users with electronic devices can keep in touch with people at ease (dễ dàng). It is apparent that they can have a conversation with others through a

touch-screen

a computer display that enables the user to interact with the computer by touching areas on the screen

touchscreen

, which can promote their social

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and help them

strenghthen

make strong or stronger

strengthen

strengthens

their social relationships.

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, by actively joining in social networks, people can seize the chances to expand their social circle.

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means that it is now possible for them to make friends around the

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globe, regardless

of geographical barriers, which in turn makes them get socialised. In conclusion,

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actually discourages people from building and cultivating human relationships in some ways, but users can reap more benefits from it in promoting social

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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if they utilize the advancement of

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properly. By harnessing

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in making social interaction effectively, people can connect with each other more easily than ever.