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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two tables depicting
sales
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 of Fairtrade
coffee
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 and bananas among five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004 In the first table, Sweeden
sales
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figure
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 was the least, at only 0.8
million
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euros
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 in 1999,
although
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 it slightly increased to 1
million
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euros
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 in 2004. In 1999, the sale of
coffee
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 in
Switzerland
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 was higher than any other country in question, at 3
million
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euros
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.
However
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, in 2004 the UK saw the
sales
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 of
coffee
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increased
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 over tenfold to 20
million
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euros
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 and it was higher than in
Switzerland
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,
although
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 the
sales
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 of
coffee
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 in
Switzerland
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 doubled to 6
million
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euros
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 between 1999 and 2004. As for the
sales
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 of bananas,
Switzerland
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's
sales
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figure
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 grew over threefold from 15-47
million
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euros
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 and was higher than all the other countries in question in 1999 and 2004. The
sales
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figure
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 in the UK was the least in 1999, but it grew slightly from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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;
on the contrary
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, Denmark's
sales
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figure
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 declined slightly from 2-0.9 and was the lowest in 2004.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
sales
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 of
coffee
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 and bananas had an increase in most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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countries between 1999 and 200.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, figure, million, euros, switzerland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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