The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two tables depicting
sales
of Fairtrade
coffee
and bananas among five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004 In the first table, Sweeden
sales
figure
was the least, at only 0.8
million
euros
in 1999,
although
it slightly increased to 1
million
euros
in 2004. In 1999, the sale of
coffee
in
Switzerland
was higher than any other country in question, at 3
million
euros
.
However
, in 2004 the UK saw the
sales
of
coffee
increased
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over tenfold to 20
million
euros
and it was higher than in
Switzerland
,
although
the
sales
of
coffee
in
Switzerland
doubled to 6
million
euros
between 1999 and 2004. As for the
sales
of bananas,
Switzerland
's
sales
figure
grew over threefold from 15-47
million
euros
and was higher than all the other countries in question in 1999 and 2004. The
sales
figure
in the UK was the least in 1999, but it grew slightly from 0.6 to 4
million
euros
;
on the contrary
, Denmark's
sales
figure
declined slightly from 2-0.9 and was the lowest in 2004.
Overall
, it is evident that the
sales
of
coffee
and bananas had an increase in most
of
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the
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countries between 1999 and 200.

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